Aborted Paradise I1I
By Masked Man

Copyright 2007 by Masked Man, all rights reserved.

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This story is intended for ADULTS ONLY. It contains depictions of sexual activity involving minors. If you are not of a legal age in your locality to view such material or if such material does not appeal to you, do not read further, and do not save this story.

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Editor's note: English is not Masked Man's native language. To retain the flavor of his style and avoid possibly changing any of his meaning, it is being presented here as originally submitted. I believe that despite the non-standard syntax, readers will encounter little, if any, difficulty in comprehension.

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It is highly recommended to read Aborted Paradise I to understand this story.


The Invasion

In most sectors in the planet the army threw sleeping gas and it worked. The marines just needed to land and carry those kids sleeping like sweet angels back to the fleet.

However the kids were preparing a defense since some time ago and in many sectors the gas was nullified. In few sectors things became ugly; the kids' army fought back while the adult marines only could use non lethal weapons; kids developed new weapons capable of nullify the best defenses of adults' armors and vehicles. Fortunately, it seems that adults invaded in the right moment; kids still had very few of those new weapons; perhaps a couple of months later it would be impossible for adults to invade NGIV without heavy casualties.

After few time they could control the situation even in the hardest sectors. The main weapon of the invasion force was an electric rifle, it caused a painful shock and the futurist design also stimulated the brain and the victim making him unconscious from some minutes to some hours depending on the individual. So, many kids returned to the ships carried sleeping after an electric shot, few resigned to their fate returned to the fleet over their own feet; and many had to be dragged or carried kicking and screaming... as it was scheduled soon the planet was totally emptied of children.

Now the coalition had an enormous number of children to allocate. NGIV children were extremely good looking and some parents were willing to take them. But they were too many to allocate in all the planets across the galaxy, and as it happens today, many parents are interested in adopt a baby not a preteen and many others wanted to raise their kids up to adulthood and unfortunately NGIV kids will remain as 10 years olds and never would grow up.

Kidonia

Kidonia was a normal planet until it suffered an accident in a big chemical plant. Luckily few people died, but the big concentration of toxic material polluted the entire planet, and the habitants resulted sterilized. With years it became a childless planet; the younger habitants were 14 years old, those teens were newborns during the accident; later no more children born.

Kidonia was in a confederation that outlawed any "non natural" ways to procreate children. It was a triumph for the most traditionalist groups fearing to create other crazy experiment like NGIV; but under Kidonian circumstances that was a problem, now the habitants had no way to procreate children. They pushed to make an exception to them but the other planets declined fearing to make "holes" in the law making Kidonia a paradise for crazy scientists like Anthony Van Houten.

Tension grew and Kidonia menaced to leave his local planet confederation and that may mean an economic collapse of the small planet.

Fortunately in the worst moment of the political crisis the invasion of NGIV happened. Suddenly a coalition force had an enormous amount of kids in urgent need to be adopted, while the Kidonians needed desperately kids to adopt: Bingo!!

Suddenly most of the frustrated Kidonian couples had at least one beautiful adopted kid to love.

NGIV kids were not used to live in family, and most were outraged for the destruction of their civilization, and they were there not for free will. So, how those kids had to be treated? Kidonians took 2 very different approaches:

Some parents took a "liberal" approach, they understood those kids hated discipline and were used to freedom. They gave them love protection, and even discipline if it was necessary, but in the limits of the common sense they tried to give those kids as much freedom as they could trying to make them feel comfortable. Almost 2/3 of the parents took this approach.

Other 1/3 took a radically different approach. They thought the best way to make the NGIV kids to accept better and faster their new situation was a strict discipline for their own good. A very popular "best seller" was almost "the Bible" for these parents was Jeff Rostov's book "Raising a happy NGIV kid"; the central concept was to make clear at all times to them that they are just children and adults are in charge. This meant a very strict discipline and make emphasis to the extreme that they are "just little kids".

In such scenario, with 2 very radical and different approaches it would be easy to have tensions and unpleasant debates. Fortunately Kidonians were wise enough to be tolerant and respectful, and to not interfere in any way on how other parents decided to handle their kids.

In streets it was quite easy with a quick look to distinguish what kind of parents had each kid.

Liberal parents allowed their kids to dress in the way they liked. Usually comfortable adult sport clothing or nostalgic clothing resembling the fashion they used in NGIV, in general they loved very fancy clothing. Their personality usually was self confident, outgoing and talkative.

On the other hand strict parents liked to dress their kids with very simple and light clothing. T-shirts and sweaters had printed very childish and dumb drawings. Boys wore short shorts and girls tiny skirts. They used to be shy and silent; everyone knew that if even the smallest fault were reported to their parents these kids will be receiving a hard spanking.

At first kids from liberal parents tried to improve things to their mates. But they realized soon that they couldn't do anything and they started to get used to the idea. Finally they started to feel a ghoulish about kids with strict parents, most started to tease them and make fun of their dumb childish clothing, their usually bare thighs, and the spankings, they knew those kids could do nothing to retaliate. Especially the spanking was a subject of morbid curiosity among kids with liberal parents.



STORY 2 - Promoting Science
Daniel – physicist.

'Ok, you are cleared to pass; welcome to Kidonia Military Research Labs...'

Nr, Gibbs the social worker was annoyed for all the controls he had to pass. But Daniel was subject of his entire curiosity...

He started to move across the installation to the specific location...

'Aerospace here...Physics in that door... force field labs second floor...'

As he approached to the location he saw a cute blond girl. She had a childish ponytail hairstyle, a dumb pattern with silly "smiling cows" on her white dress and a very tiny skirt that easily revealed her underwear with any rude movement.

Gibbs smiled looking how docile the girl was walking holding her mom's hand.

As a social worker, Gibbs knew most of NGIV kids as they arrived to Kidonia. He was in charge to assign them parents and in theory if they received a liberal or strict parent it was decide entirely by luck. However when he saw a kid that he considered especially beautiful or charming, he had the power to "load the dices" so those kids ended in the custody of the stricter parents he could find.

In some cases that "load of dices" came from above him. Kids considered potentially "dangerous" should be controlled with severe discipline; this was meant to be a cover operation but everyone knew about this rumor.

'Daniel in so long you just have done only this?'

'It's not my fault; I don't have the resources and personal...'

'We are providing you everything Daniel...'

'No! You scattered many of my collaborators across the galaxy...'

'Each confederation demanded at least one kid scientist. It was impossible to hold all of you together...'

'Then don't blame me; I am not responsible for your stupid politic schemes. You got the best one so you shouldn't be complaining then.'

'You are right you are meant to be the best one however our intelligence says we are the slowest. Besides we bring you Tania so you can't complain about lack of your former personal'

Daniel looked at the girl with a derogatory smirk 'Ha! What a joke, don't make me laugh! Anyone can do his job even a dumb adult scientist'

The girl lowered her head blushing and with her self esteem shattered.

'Besides; everything what you are asking me, are things that I already had done before. Everything was stored in our computers but your stupid army erased them with EPs...'

'We are working hard trying to recover that data...'

'Then go to pester your engineers and leave me alone; I will have your stuff when it is ready, but not before OK? Just provide me what I want I don't work well under pressure, understood?'

Daniel was used to be a tyrant. He was only one with the knowledge to develop technology able to trespass the most powerful force fields and armors. Kids knew with that technology it would be almost impossible for adults to attack their planet, so Daniel was crucial for them. Daniel knew that; he was very demanding with his fellow kids and was treated like a king.

Adults were different than his former fellow kids; however he learned fast that he was also very important to them and they can be manipulated in a similar way.

After that chat the science officer, Major Reynolds, retired exasperated with the difficult boy.

A woman was waiting them to finish their discussion and then she approached with a tray.

'What's this?' The boy asked annoyed while looking a bowl with a vegetable soap and a salad.

'I am sorry, your medic ordered this, and we are worry about your diet...'

As a reply, the boy suddenly slapped the tray throwing the bawl and food to the floor.

'And that man thinks I am? A rabbit? I want a fillet or a chop...'

'But your doctor...'

'You didn't hear Major Reynolds? He told everything I need... if he comes tomorrow to pester me again about my work I will have the excuse that I had my stomach empty... he will not be so happy and that will be your fault.'

The woman remained silent for a moment; she might be in trouble with the doctor however Major Reynolds is the ultimate boss and he has been in very bad mood lately because of Daniel. Fearing for her job the woman nodded, the boy screamed just before she leaves:

'...And don't forget it, also a good dessert, eh?!!'

At last Daniel centered his attention in Mr. Gibbs:

'And you what?'

'I...I... am a social worker, I came to see you...'

'Well you already saw me; I am fine you see and I am working... so report that to your boss and go.... or do you need something else?' Daniel had a bad feeling about being visited by a social worker so he tried to get ride of him fast.

'Eh!...no.'

Gibbs retired from the room a bit offended and very surprised. NGIV children are very unused to adults' authority and he had found many problematic kids; but this was beyond anything he had seen before; he felt his blood boiling excited thinking in this challenge...

'Hello Miss; I would like to see Major Reynolds; I don't have an appointment but I am a government employ, a social worker, it's about Daniel.'

'Mmmmmmm.... the Major is very busy right now, please take a sit and wait to see if he can see you now...'

'(I swear I will find the way to fix that brat...)' Gibbs thought while sitting. He took his computer and started to surf in the files of parents wishing to adopt a kid. '(Herbert Ross... this man looks interesting...).'

'Ok Mr. Gibbs you can see the Major now.'

'Major Reynolds, I am a social worker. I came to see Daniel's situation...'

'Yes I saw you there some minutes ago...'

'As you may imagine our main concern is our rescued children. We are trying to allocate them in loving families and we try to be sure they are in healthy environments and in the right adult supervision...However I am not satisfied with Daniel's conditions around here, he is surrounded by personal but not properly supervised, besides...'

'Look, look! I have a lot a lot of pressures now! My superiors want results fast, that kid doesn't have the attitude to cooperate in the rhythm that my superiors demand; each day is worst and the last thing I need now is a bureaucrat pushing even more; this project is very important to the confederation and you don't have...'

'Wait, Wait Major! I am not your enemy; I didn't come to cause you more trouble, on contrary. I may help you. We can reach an agreement that may make us happy to both of us...'

'I'm listening'

'Daniel needs to have access to laboratory equipment...'

'No, he is a theoretical physicist...'


'But I was doing fine in the lab; I don't understand why I must go to live in a house now...'

'Come on Daniel. You will se it will be better for you, a lab is a place to work but not to live, you'll see you will be happier there...' A woman tried to convince Daniel, but the kid smelled something fishy about all this.

'We are here. Ok go inside, there is someone there to give you further instructions.'

Daniel entered into the house. He suddenly saw a man, slender almost skinny, very tall and with a very severe and angry gesture. He was that kind of scary adult able to make feel fear to any kid, even a kid like Daniel.

'Go up, to the left door; that one is your room; I have to talk something that is not business of little kids, and don't dare to go out until I tell you or you will be very sorry' The man ordered with a severe bossy voice and a scorn sight.

Daniel heart paralyzed. '(oh no! I hope this is not what I am thinking)'.

Surprised and very overwhelmed by the man's scary personality Daniel obeyed without protest. He remained in his new room, very anxious waiting an eternal half of hour while the man was talking with the people from the lab. Finally he saw the door opening and the tall man entered. Both sat in the bed and started talking:

'Daniel, you were adopted and now I am your father. My name is Herbert.'

'You?!' The boy exclaimed scared. This was what he feared.

'Yes, and we must talk about how is going to change in your life from now on. I will give you right now some rules...'

'I would like to have some rules too...'

'No Danny, I am the adult I make the rules here, and you are the kid so you only obey and be sure about it, every time you break a rule you will be punished, and I will be sure that you regret it. Here you will march straight and I will transform you into a "sweet little boy". And by the way one rule is to never, never interrupt an adult, do it again and this chat is over and you will receive your first chastisement...'

'...How...How... I will be punished?' The boy asked with a scared voice that started to sound tearful and very cautious to not sound like he was interrupting again.

'You are very smart Danny. You tell me. How kids are punished in what you called the "adult planets"?'

'They...they are...spanked?' Daniel answered, hopping that this answer was wrong for his case.

'Yes you are right. That means I will beat your bare butt, and I will do it hard until I am sure that you are sorry and I achieved something.'

'Sir; Can I have a concession? Just one small, I will not ask more than this; it's very important for me sir. We, we are very bashful in our culture; can you exclude the bare part?' Daniel asked, now fully crying and his face full with tears.

'No Danny!' Herbert told with emphasis and continued.

'You are not in your culture anymore, you are a preteen boy and you don't have reason to be bashful, I will not encourage any kind of false modesty, you are just a kid and that will give you a wrong message. Besides a proper spanking is done in the bare butt, if not, that's not really a spanking.'

Daniel was looking down and the floor started to have many of his tears.

'You will start your day at 6:00 AM, and will take your breakfast fast; at 6:30 you should be in the garden ready, a delay will mean a canning. You will do an intense routine of exercises and if I consider your performance poor you will be spanked...'

The severe Herbert continued:

'...You are a very gifted kid, so I must be sure to teach you to use your talent in pro of our society. Major Reynolds will come Daily to give you work to do, and not doing it according to his expectations will be highly penalized. You also will have a hypocaloric diet totally based in vegetables; your doctor says that's the best for you.'

'I heard you are a very argumentative kid; that's over here. To backtalk to any adult will be considered a major offence, I expect you to be very respectful with your elders and you must ask permission before talking. Actually I am being lax with you talking right now, I am in charge here and you are just a kid, in the future I will not give you any explanation and I expect you to do what I say. And I am excusing you crying too right now, "bad attitudes" will not be tolerated, you must act with the best disposition, so if you cry I will help you and give you a "good reason" to cry.'

Before arriving to the house Daniel had a bad feeling and thought all this will be something bad; but this was worst than anything he could imagine. He will be living a hell in life.

'Now come, on I will give you a bath...'

The bashful boy felt paralyzed and a void in his stomach with the word "bath".

'...And later I will give you clothes proper for a little boy'

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Gibbs was very eager to check Herbert's progress with Daniel after 2 months of his adoption.

'Danny, come here we have visits...'

Daniel was in a desk making a computer job like if his life depended on it and not interested in anything else. However hearing Herbert he left his work at the moment.

'Yes daddy I am going...'

Mr. Gibbs was pleasantly surprised with the change. He was wearing a very cheap stripped shirt and jeans clearly cut with scissors revealing his skinny pale thighs; and the best thing he looked now so submit and docile, no more of that arrogant boy he knew.

'Hello sir' the boys told, shy, insecure but polite.

'Oh! I am very satisfied; he was such a brat and now he looks so different...'

'Yes, I am very strict with him, that's the best way to help these kids to adapt to their new way of life. All children need discipline and these kids are so unused to it' Herbert explained while Gibbs sat Danny over his lap.

'And tell me Danny, what happens if you misbehave?' Gibbs asked with a smirk.

'I...I... am spanked...'

'Oh and how you are spanked?'

'On... on... my bare butt.'

Off course Gibbs knew the answer, but he loved to ask that and to look the blush on the kids whole answering. Then he placed Daniel over his back and started tickle him all around his belly and ribs...

'And thanks to that you are a good boy?'

'Yes....yes' the boy answered squirming and laughing hysterically.

It was common in Kidonia for adults to tickle children with strict parents, it was a soft game that gave the message that adults are stronger and in charge, and kids knew that any standoffish attitude will not be tolerated.

Gibbs used to do this often and knew the most ticklish spots, kids hated it and Gibbs knew it, but they could do nothing, any bad manner would be severely punished.

They stayed like that some minutes; Daniel was already red and breathless when they were interrupted by Herbert:

'Sorry to disturb Mr. Gibbs. Danny the Major is already here...'

Very polite and insecure, Daniel approached to the Major to tell him respectfully "hi sir".

'Ok let's see what you have for me today.' Major Reynolds asked; the boy could send his work and receive new chores in the web, however the Major preferred personal contact.

'Sir I couldn't finish the last 3, we have visit...' the boy explained insecure and with certain fear...

'Danny, you must be responsible and not try to find excuses for your duties, besides it's impolite to say that when our guest is still here.' Herbert scolded and Daniel lowered his head fearing what he knew is going to come now.

'Let's see, 7 of 10 done, this one is worth 3 stars this one 5....' Herbert started to check Daniel's work, he was making some simple but confusing arithmetic operations, Mr. Biggs tried to follow it but he got lost.

'5 Daniel.' Herbert determined.

'No, it's 4' Daniel corrected whispering and very insecure, he barely could be heard.

'What you did you tell?'

'Nothing'

'Yes you are right I am wrong it's not 5 it's 7, now I am right or I am wrong again?'

'No sir'

Then Herbert held Daniel's arm and dragged him to a wall.

'No daddy, please not now, please wait until the night...'

Herbert ignored him; he put his face very close to the wall, then he crouched undoing the button on his shorts and pulled them down along with his underwear.

'Stay there silent, and remember if you mover a muscle you will be very, very sorry.'

Herbert returned with the other 2 men, and they remained there some time drinking coffee, chatting about politics sports and other "adult stuff".

From time to time Mr. Gibbs tried to be subtle and took a look to the cornered boy. He tried to remember the arrogance he showed just 2 months ago, now he was watching him, scared, waiting chastisement, exposing his 2 beautiful couple of white cheeks; Mr. Gibbs felt very proud of his job.

'Ok Danny you know what to do get ready...' Herbert ordered turning around a chair in the dinning room.

Daniel moved his feet removing his shorts and underwear from his ankles. With fear he approached covering shy his front with his hands. He stood over the chair and bent placing his arms over the table and covering with them his face.

Herbert took a cane, it looked like those classic wood canes used in the past but it also had some sort of electronic handle. Herbert placed it on "level 3".

That device left painful and clear marks over the butt depending on the level it was set; those marks might look serious but were harmless and used to disappear in few hours leaving soon the butt "ready" for other chastisement.

Before starting Herbert rubbed his hand over the boy's soft butt and then he landed the cane.

SPANK
'OUUUUCH!!!.... one'

A clear red mark appeared over his "milky" skin

SPANK
'AGGGGGRRR!!!....2'

SPANK
'OUUUUCH!!!.... 3'

He his voice started to sound tearful

SPANK
'OUUUUCH!!!.... four'


The boy rubbed moved his arm from his head from one moment to rub his sore butt. Herbert placed back Daniel's arm and gave him other hit:

SPANK
'ARRRGH!!!.... Five'

'That one doesn't, it was for interfering' Herbert scolded.

SPANK
'OUUUUCH!!!.... Five'

SPANK
'OUCHHH OUUUCH....'

The kid couldn't anymore; he stood up and started to move around the room jumping and making a funny "spanking dance", rubbing his butt furiously forgetting completely about his modesty, giving to the men a clear view if his hairless front.

Quickly Herbert Held his ear

'Come on I have told you many times to not do that...'

He started to hit his thighs with the cane while dragging him back to his place. The kid started to jump trying to evade the cane; they looked more like that classic scene of a bandit shooting a cowboy's shoes to make him "dance".

'Now we must start over again. I have no problem with that we can stay all night if you are enjoying this, the next time I will put the cane in level four that will "improve" things for you'

SPANK
'OUUUUCH!!!.... one'

They stared all over again

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SPANK
'AGGGGH!!!.... four'

Daniel shook his butt and moved his ankle stomping his feet on the chair in pain. He was doing a tremendous effort to not do a "spanking dance" again.

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SPANK
'OUUUUCH!!!.... seven'

Finally he could do freely his spanking dance trying to clam down the tremendous sting he was feeling. He was crying loud by now. Finally, he lay down over a couch still rubbing his sore buttocks.

'Ok Daniel, when you are finish go back to the corner. I want to see those red marks on display.'

'Thank you for everything Mr. Herbert, here is the work for tomorrow; I will be back at the same hour.' The major announced

Mr. Gibbs gone out satisfied and concluding that Herbert was the best choice for Daniel's case.

Major Reynolds never got bored of such Daily show. No more stress and waiting for him, now he had a trusty "mathematical" machine to deliver in time and fast everything that the high command required. They still had a lot of projects for Daniel in the incoming years.

End of story 2.