A Summer at the Comeuppance Lodge Part 1
by SusieQue

copyright 2007 by SusieQue, all rights reserved
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A Summer at the Comeuppance Lodge
a fictional story written by SusieQue

Part 1

The Roberts children were spoiled, unruly, self-involved and completely unfocused and unmotivated. 12 year old Jordan was the oldest. He was mean and lazy and quite overweight for his age due to doing nothing but watching TV and playing video games. His room was a pigsty and although he was un- bathed and had unkempt hair, and clothes that were wrinkled and mismatched, beneath the bloated face and body you could see the potential of a handsome young man with chestnut brown hair and deep brown eyes. Rebecca who was 10 and the only female child was thin and willowy and had long golden blonde hair with gentle waves that she wore wild and free flowing about her delicate frame almost to her waist like the mane of a show horse. Rebecca was not lazy, she was in fact hyperactive, and highly motivated when she wanted to be, but she was mean and heartless and had a temper like a fiery volcano. She mercilessly tortured her younger siblings, 8 year old twins James and Jeffrey. James was 5 minutes older by birth and he was definitely the instigator of all the twins woes. Jeffrey was perhaps the only Roberts child that showed any signs of character prior to the summer of their comeuppance, but alas he was just the hand puppet of his twin brother who thought getting into trouble was the most fun in the world, and if Jeffrey ever tried to defy his brothers mischievous plans, Rebecca would do terrible things to him, like the time Jeffrey refused to throw rocks at old man Winters barn to break the windows, Rebecca and James held poor Jeffrey down, and stripped off all his clothes, and then with Jeffrey lying naked in the dirt, James held Jeffery's hands over his head, and Rebecca took a box elder tree switch..and beat her little brother as he flailed in the dirt rolling from front to back, she striped his legs and buttocks and gave him some particularly cruel welts across his genital area. The adorable flaxen haired twin boys were definitely in need of some serious guidance and discipline.

Both of the Roberts parents worked full time, both were successful professionals, and although they had tried to raise their children right, the birth of the twins left them feeling overwhelmed and totally out of control. One day Mrs Roberts received a call at work that all 4 of her children had been caught shoplifting at a local store and the police chief was holding them until a parent arrived.

This happened on the very first day of summer vacation and Mrs Roberts was nearly in a panic before she arrived at the police station as to how she was ever going to get through the summer with these children. No one wanted to babysit them and she felt totally helpless.

When she arrived at the police station the kindly old chief who felt for her plight handed her a brochure and grabbed her arm and whispered, "take your kids home, put them to bed..and read this..don't delay."

Mrs Roberts thanked him for his understanding, she wrote a check of restitution for the shoplifting..and loaded her kids in the car..and sent them all to bed..they of course were snickering and cocky..but she just couldn't deal with it.

She made herself a cup of green tea..and curled up on the window seat of her lavish home..and pulled out the brochure the chief had given her.

"Manners, discipline, motivation and accountability a problem in your home? No time to teach your children the basics of behavior?" Mrs Roberts found herself shaking her head emphatically and her heartbeat raced as she read on hoping her cure for her troubles were in this pamphlet. "send your child or children to the Comeuppance Lodge nestled in the rustic foothills just 20 miles outside of the booming city of Horizon, West Virginia (population 600,000) and in one summers time we will cure a lifetime of bad manners and bad habits via strict rules and regulations and a healthy dose of severe corporal punishment, emphasis on building a good work ethic via mandatory chores, and lots of other unique and creative methods designed to build character, humility and respect for authority.

"Does your child have trouble sitting still in public situations..church..movie
theaters..plays...funerals..weddings..do you long to be the one with the child that everyone gasps at as being such a polite angel?" Mrs Roberts fantasy of yes! yes!! Yes!! I want that to be my children!! was interrupted by loud thumping and loud laughter from upstairs..her children would not even obey to go to bed when told and they were running through the upstairs throwing things and acting like the unruly brats they were. She yelled up at them "You are all going away to summer camp tomorrow!! now GO to bed!!" She went back to reading..."We can cure squirming and lack of attention and assure polite quietness with 2 words 'ginger root' "Don't ask" the brochure said. Mrs Roberts thought..hmmm..dietary supplement?

During the course of the summer the children would not be allowed to call home at all and there would only be one parent visitation weekend which would be 3 weeks before summers end. Although the brochure promised to re-school any disobedient child during the course of the summer, they also offered an option for the child to attend their school the following year..if improved academics and performance in school was a major problem. Sign up for the academic year would take place during the parent visitation weekend when the parents could see how their child had improved thus far. The cost was high but money was no object for the Roberts. THUD giggle giggle giggle Mrs Roberts heard from upstairs again, she couldn't grab the phone soon enough and she knew if she waited she'd never have the guts to do what she knew in her heart was the best thing for her children, even if it meant making this decision without her husband who was once again..working late.

She dialed the number.."Hello?" Yes I'd like some more information on your Lodge..well actually I'd like to sign my children up now I think I know all I need to know" The very pleasant voice on the other end said "yes ma'am that's excellent!! oh you won't be sorry I can promise you that!! I came here 10 years ago as an unruly resident, and I've never left! I got my high school diploma here and earned the money for college answering phones and doing bookkeeping, I graduate next spring with a degree in Business! Anyway I apologize for talking about myself, how many children do you wish to enroll and what are their names and ages?"

Mrs Roberts gave all the pertinent information as well as a little background on each child. "I see well it sounds like you do have your hands full! We do actually have 4 separate villages here each self sufficient, and fully functional on its own, we recommend separating siblings when enrolling more than one child especially in the case of twins, so I will assign each of your children to a different village. Which child would you say is the most unruly?", she asked. "Rebecca" Mrs Roberts replied without hesitation. "Fine" said the young woman I will assign her to Daddy Bailey's village" Mrs Roberts asked "why" The young lady replied "Each of our villages has a daddy that oversees all operations and monitors everyone's progress. The village daddy is by far not the villages only disciplinarian not by a longshot, but every other guidance person in the village answers to him and carries out his commands and if the village daddy is displeased with any of his staffs performance, he has the right and obligation to severely whip the staff member and make sure that the staff member corrects whatever it was that displeased him. Daddy Bailey is our most effective and severe daddy, he is a very large man, has a full scruffy beard and stands over 6'5" tall and has large hands and a grand belly that slaps against the naughty child's back that has the misfortune of going across his knee. He was my daddy and when I first came here, he used to scare me so much just looking at me that I used to pee myself! I grew to love him and to this day he still scares me but when I feel I need an attitude adjustment I always go to him for a dose of his hard love. Every time he reduces me to a blubbering child, but he always knows just exactly what I needed." Mrs Roberts said "Hmmm..sounds like just what Rebecca needs!"

The helpful receptionist them took payment information and told Mrs. Roberts that additional paperwork would arrive in the mail as well, and that consent forms were going to be Faxed to her office and even though the children could leave in the morning, she would have to fax the signed forms back to the office before the children arrived. She further informed Mrs Roberts that the children were not to bring or pack anything. Everything they needed including clothing and personal items like tooth brushes would be provided. Anything a child does bring besides weather appropriate Spartan clothing will result in the child getting a severe welcome spanking for not following the rules.

She then said "and last but not least your children may catch the same flight here they are all booked to arrive at 3 PM tomorrow afternoon..have them at the airport by 8 am tomorrow. No luggage..tell them only that they are going to summer camp..and do not tell them they are going to be separated. Get them all on that plane we will meet them at the airport at the other end and we will take everything from there. Just fax us back those forms after you drop your children off at the airport and enjoy your summer and progress reports and an invitation to the parents weekend will be sent to you. Leave it all up to us now!" the perky voice chimed.

"Thank you....thank you so much"...Mrs Roberts sobbed as a rush of many emotions came over her.."You are doing the right thing for your children" assured the kindly young voice. "I knnn-ow" Mrs Roberts said..as she hung up the phone..she felt exhausted..and went up to bed..and set her alarm..she decided not to even tell her husband until the children were gone..she laid down..and closed her eyes..and slept more deeply than she had in a long time....

Sometime during the night Mr. Roberts came home and was gone the next morning again before Mrs. Roberts and the children awoke. Her alarm went off and she arose feeling energized and refreshed, she quickly awoke all the children and her energy and enthusiasm got them all up and dressed in record time.

She told them all not to pack or bring anything but the light summer clothes on their backs.

Off to the airport they went, their tickets were waiting at the counter and the check-in clerk winked at Mrs. Roberts and said "oh yes these are the resort children, we will take GOOD care of them don't you worry one bit." Mrs Roberts attempted to hug her children none of whom wanted any part of it except Jeffrey. She turned, waved..and rushed out of the terminal to her car.

Once inside her car she smiled and felt better about herself than she had in years. She decided to take the day off of work after retrieving, signing and faxing back the consent forms, and enjoy the quiet and peace in her house. As she padded about her quiet home, the words of the consent forms rang in her ears.."child will be subjected to severe corporal punishment involving various implements, as well as public nakedness and forced public masturbation, public punishment with no regard or reprieve due to how many people may be watching nor how much the child cries. There will be no coddling nor any mercy and a child will come to know he or she has performed well when they are spared punishment or on special occasions exemplary performance will be rewarded with a single pat on the head. No child will be denied regular nutritious food nor any necessary medical attention for any situation that may arise. By signing this agreement you are allowing us to take full control of your children's care for the duration of the summer, allowing us to do as we see fit without asking your permission"

As they snuggled in bed together for the first night without having to fight with ill mannered children, Mrs Roberts smiled and wondered what the kids first day had been like....