I'm enjoying figuring out ASSTR's formatting issues. If you read this story and there is no line wrap, or my commas (,), apostrophes (') or ellipsis (...) are missing, this may or may not be my fault, but I truly intended them to be there. Pretend they are. Humor me... Anyway I’m reformatting to html, maybe that will help.

This is a work of erotic fiction. If you may not, should not, or do not want to read this, then please do not.

Note. This is an outline of a story that came to me last night. Over the next few days or weeks, I'll add to it and flesh it out and see what happens. Let me know if you like it or not. [email protected]

Working Title: Nocturnal Erethism

er·e·thism (r-thzm)
n.

Abnormal irritability or sensitivity of an organ or a body part to stimulation.

[French éréthisme, from Greek erethisma, a provocation, fromerethizein, to irritate.]

ere·thismic (-mk) adj.

Background.

Our protagonist is a young woman, in her mid to late 20's, living alone in an apartment. She is heterosexual, has a boyfriend that lives in the same city, and works as a professional (software engineer?). She is around 5'4", weight proportionate, short blonde hair, pretty without being obnoxious - girl next office type. She will develop this problem of orgasming whenever she wakes up, even from a nap. At first they are mild and she accepts it, but slowly gets worried. By the end, she is totally freaked out, has had sex with numerous people, and might possibly be losing her ability to control her sexuality. She will however, maintain a complete grasp and awareness of what is happening. She won't become mindless.

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Beth awoke with a glorious shiver. Her arms stretched and she felt her pussy clenching on nothing. She opened her eyes and looked around the sunny room, thinking "What a nice way to start the day!" Her hand slipped down and massaged her clit, slipping easily in her moist slit. She frowned slightly in intensity, and another small orgasm washed over her.

"I've got to start the day like this more often," Beth thought to herself as she reluctantly got up and headed for the shower. The hot water washed away the evidence and she soaped and rinsed herself diligently. She could recall no dreams, which was unusual. Coffee dripped through the basket of grounds and prepared itself to be drunk. Toast popped up as Beth answered the phone. Her boyfriend Dan. LUNCH! That's right. "Dan, I was just thinking about you. I, uh, had a dream... You were wonderful... Yes I did. I am NOT a naughty girl! It was just because I missed you so much... Yes, Noon. At the cafe. Love you! Bye..." Beth hung up with a satisfied smile...

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We will rejoin Beth tonight as she readies for bed. She'll think back on the day, her lunch with Dan, how he tried to "get some" under the table at lunch.

Beth snaps awake in the throes of an intense orgasm. Descriptions again of the feelings, with an undertone of whatinhellisgoingon? With the fading orgasm, Beth thinks about the previous morning, and how great it had been, but now she's wondering why again? Brief description of morning routine. No additional playing with herself. At work, Beth emails Sue, her friend and tells her twice in a row she's awoke in orgasm, has she ever heard of such a thing? At home tonight, Beth has gotten herself jittery like a hypochondriac. She doesn't want to go to sleep but...

Unsurprisingly, Beth snaps awake in throes of another intense orgasm. Descriptions intermingle with fear of what is happening. Beth knows now something is going on, and knows it isn't normal. Her morning will be spent imagining that people she encounters know something is wrong. She spots that geeky guy in support eyeing her chest. She is very tired from last night because she went to bed late. She decides to have lunch at her desk and inadvertently drifts off...

Beth snaps awake at her desk in the throes of an incredible orgasm. She knows she is at work and that she drifted off, and she struggles to be quiet, but not with 100% success. One other female programmer in a nearby office caught on, and she got some odd looks from two men later on. At home that night, Beth is panicked. She tries to get through to her doctor, but he is away and another doctor is covering his calls. She is too embarrassed to see a stranger, so she doesn't make the appointment. She is now actively afraid to fall asleep and lasts until Jay Leno's monologue...

Beth snaps awake in the throes of an incredible orgasm. The orgasms have been getting better and stronger each morning. She isn't able to resist fingering herself this time even though she is frightened. Perhaps she uses the bedside phone to masturbate with. (Sue or that female programmer will visit later in day(?) and smell the vaginal juices on it).She goes to work in a daze. She can't concentrate. The female programmer from the day before notices something is wrong and tries to help her. Beth won't say what the problem is, but um, Cheryl, assumes its a boy problem. They have lunch and take an early day. Cheryl is of course, interested, and Beth has no idea. Somehow they wind up at Beth's apartment, and sit on the sofa eating Ben & Jerry’s and talking. Beth falls asleep. Cheryl pokes around, make a call from the bedroom (told yah so) and hangs back on the sofa with Beth. Cheryl is unable to resist the sleeping form and stroke Beth's hair, gets more adventurous and more or less molests the sleeping Beth. While Cheryl is rubbing Beth's pussy through clothing...Beth snaps awake in the throes of an incredible orgasm. She is utterly unaware of her surroundings, only the burning desire in her groin. She pushes her pussy against the intruder and just enjoys the hell out of herself. She gradually realizes she is not in bed and not alone, and that this girl has her hand in Beth's pants. She is still intensely aroused and when Cheryl (who of course assumes Beth has wanted her all along) begins to make out with her she gives in and the session turns into a wakeful lovemaking session. Later, Beth explains, Cheryl feels guilty (but not THAT guilty) and they fall asleep in each other's arms. Beth (well, you know) and they renew their lovemaking. Detailed descriptions of their breakfast, showering, dressing... Beth is convinced to see the doctor and she makes the appointment. Calls in sick, but Cheryl leaves for work. Borrows a new blouse from Beth. Beth potters around the house until her appointment. She arrives and sees the doc. She has difficulty explaining, but finally gets it all out. The doc might make an inappropriate comment about why does she want this condition fixed? Some testing is arranged, nurse takes intimate samples (juices, etc).Beth gets some envious looks from nurse as she leaves. At home that night...Dan comes over and wines and dines Beth. They sit, talking, if we haven't already clued in Dan, this is the time to tell him some of what is happening. He is concerned, but also turned on. He stays the night and they make love.

Beth snaps awake in the throes of an incredible orgasm. She finds Dan positioned between her legs and as she climaxes, he enters her and they continue for some time. He later tells her that she had never been so hot as this time. He can't get enough. They breakfast, shower together (hey, she doesn't like to shower alone?) and dress. As they leave, he takes her again and she goes to work with his evidence soaking into her panties. She has an awkward moment in the hall with Cheryl, Beth isn't to sure how she feels about the other day, and has a boyfriend, after all. Cheryl wants to be with her again. They have lunch, and Cheryl takes advantage, finding of course, an overly moist vagina. Cheryl may consider a threesome? Perhaps after lunch they have a quickie, but that might be out of character for Beth. Beth gets a call in the afternoon, asking her to come to the doctors office for further testing. She does, and she is given a sedative... Beth snaps awake in the throes of an incredible orgasm. The doctor and nurse look on, mystified. No one knows what is happening, but the preliminary results may be in tomorrow. At home that night...Dan is over again. Possibly Cheryl shows up unexpectedly. Either way, well this is a sex story. They make love and fall asleep, but Beth gets to tell Dan she felt violated this morning when he took advantage of her. He promises to be good...

Beth snaps awake... Dan was good, but in his sleep his hand had rested on her pussy. She attacks him and masturbates furiously with his arm. She stays home today to wait for the doctor's call. The call... She has an erethism. An abnormal irritability or sensitivity ofan organ or a body part to stimulation. In this cage, her clitoris. No, the doctor isn't sure why. Perhaps an allergy. Not sure what to, but she should purchase some new clothing and change detergents, etc. She should avoid the foods in the house, blah blah and sleep without clothes or blankets tonight. This whole area needs to be thought out and internally consistent, but with that unknown, why is her body reacting this way? Beth takes the night off from sex. Well, maybe a little self help, we'll see.

Beth snaps awake in the throes of an incredible orgasm. Sleeping nude didn't help, and if anything, this was the strongest yet. Cheryl arrives, concerned because Beth had been out the previous day. Naturally, she tries to, and we'll probably let her succeed, seduce Beth again. Beth will probably windup bisexual at least.

Erie little paragraph where a neighbor, male, is fading off to sleep, laughing and evil laugh.

We leave the reader wondering if Beth will find a cure, or will she simply take to napping more often(!). Also, who was that seedy character just at the end? Could he be the cause of Beth's troubles? Perhaps he just has unusually good hearing. Perhaps he is a chemist and seeded Beth's underwear with an allergenic to cause the erethism? Perhaps he will get to have Beth once or more, by being there when she wakes up. Perhaps upon waking she develops an inability to resist? Will that nurse pursue Beth? Or will she try to get "infected". Perhaps Beth is contagious and infects Cheryl. My God, what if it spreads and the whole world catches this condition? Well, probably not...